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Decent.

The animation wasn't timed right. There should have been some sound effects for his movements, and the song was horrible (no matter how cute it almost was).

Although the character himself is cool and you should try to incorporate an upgraded version of him in upcoming projects.

Damn fine.

Good ass piece of work. Seriously, I loved that. The only part that seemed a little offbeat was the maze scene... took a little too long. Other than that, everything was great.

I really hope this gets into the Top 10 all-time, it's definitely good enough to.

Submit some more stuff plz! Whether for class or not.

Was decent.

I liked the concept. Nice use of the action figures/toys. Very creative.

I just dont like Tom Goes to the Mayor's sense of humor. I get it, I just don't think it's funny.. Like an un-funny Office Space......

You should do this again and try to counter the dullness of TGttM with something more internet friendly... Like fat kids lip-syncing :\

Oh, and the voices were terrible. Get some of your other friend's to do it, or speak in your best, different voice.

I dunno, it was alright. Like everything else on NG though, it could've been better had you put about twice the work in it.

XxwaSSupxX responds:

Yeah, like i said im thinking about making it into a series that each episode would be about 10 minutes long and it would have a lot more pictures and such. You should let me know what you think about this brilliant idea.

Great, but needs sound work.

That was long. I didn't expect that. Impressed me a lot that it didn't end after that first short scene. :)

Anyway on with the review!!

Sound - The voice acting is good, however, the quality of the voices is bad in the sense that it makes everyone sound like they have a lisp. Try getting some better sound software and take more time on it making it perfect (especially if you plan on making this a series).

Animation - The characters were very original, unique, and... well.. cool. But! I think you tried to be lazy and not add very many action sequences. That or you aren't good at drawing action poses. Probably the latter judging by how the girl ran. If you are gonna focus on her running for so long, at least add a few more frames to the animation.

Animation Tip - If you can't draw action poses well, have a friend take pictures of you in different poses, then trace a few in-betweens, you'll get the hang of it pretty quick that way.

Music - Best music arranging I've heard in a Flash... ever. Better than a lot of shows on TV too. Very very well done. The extra loading time was definitely worth it.

Overall - Fucking loved it. Very posh. :o

Needed sound badly.

Great animation. If it had a song that went along with it fairly well it would be dope.

...Really really well done for FBF and only a mouse.

I really think you should focus on FBF and invest in a graphic tablet. Start coloring it (or get someone to color it for you).

Other than that... seriously, damn fine FBF'in.

...wtf?

I'm not sure what just happened...

Wiki-robot-of-doom...?

Thats just not good... not good at all.

Needed sound pretty hard and was way too slow paced. Add some zooms and pans next time... Maybe a little movement.

Was ok..

I liked the idea. Was really expecting something else (Nes + Snes Links battling N64 and GameCube Links). Oh well.. history lessons are ok sometimes.

RyuXKen responds:

yea especially if they are about video games!

Subtitles please..

It was a pretty good story, but hard to follow along with because half the time I couldn't understand the text-to-voice engine. In Pt. 2 please include a subtitle feature.

Btw, SpriteRemixClock fucked my wife too... -_-

CrustClock responds:

SpriteRemixClock is prolific!

And yes, I will include optional subs in part 2. I would have done in this movie (I appreciate that not everyone has an ear for speakonia voices) but as it turned out I was still busy finishing this movie on Clockday morning and I didn't have the time (I wanted to submit fairly early). Thanks for the review.

Nice ending

The father was even annoying me... Good writing. I wish something bad happened to him though.

"Not anymore bitch" fucking priceless.

:O lip-synching

It looked so promising until I saw the lip-synching... You might want to look up on aboutdotcom or cartoonsmart a tutorial about lipsynching. Preston Blair has a good one.

I really just couldn't overcome it...

Hey! You should do a Kung-Pow ripoff and make an old Chinese movie.

...too lazy.

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